tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824277020285722649.post1385119234499248613..comments2023-05-23T04:41:44.443-07:00Comments on Lives of the Spiders: Fourth DraftRobert Mchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04013788250792475947noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824277020285722649.post-39568285163740964002010-04-16T11:31:23.595-07:002010-04-16T11:31:23.595-07:00Thanks for reading this at Book Cellar.Thanks for reading this at Book Cellar.Richard Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14848075548303794214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824277020285722649.post-88055360691888536352010-04-12T17:52:51.149-07:002010-04-12T17:52:51.149-07:00PS/ Please read this at BOTH venues this week. Thi...PS/ Please read this at BOTH venues this week. This is my personal request.Richard Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14848075548303794214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824277020285722649.post-34607605570772234942010-04-12T17:51:21.452-07:002010-04-12T17:51:21.452-07:00Wow. This has leapt light years ahead, & it fe...Wow. This has leapt light years ahead, & it feels completed in this form (even with the mis-posted line breaks). I love the inclusion of the movie reference at the end; the poem is brought together so very well over this; all the animal references now feel as though they have an even better reason to be in the poem than before. Not that they were out of place, it's simply that their places have been "earned" & become more of the glue that binds & connects.Richard Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14848075548303794214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824277020285722649.post-69505074552987988582010-04-12T11:44:02.590-07:002010-04-12T11:44:02.590-07:00Ooops- the line breaks didn't post right. Bu...Ooops- the line breaks didn't post right. But it's still a work in progress.Robert Mchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04013788250792475947noreply@blogger.com